Dream Deep

It really does. ^_~ Lol, I'm gonna be gone over the weekend, but I'm going to bring my notebooks for this along, and hopefully I'll be able to get it ...

Lol, that's allright. I often get side-tracked. No pressure, lol, do it whenever you feel like it, my friend. Heh, but don't wait too long, I'm deleting it in a ...

Uh, Chief, ya spelled Karenina wrong... o.O

Citizen Kane? XD.

Pretty to read. ^_^

Definitely. ^_^ But it was randomly fun to read, anyway...

Thanks Rei. ^_^ (Yes indeed, inspired rambling... better than inane rambling, but equally rambly.)

Oh no, the description in between was great, it was more of the scattered aspect. Just a little bit hard to follow, the way you spread it out and set ...

Beautiful, Bjorn, but have you considered maybe combining some of the lines, so it doesn't appear so thin and long? ^_~

Why, thank you!

Thanks Kay! ^_~ And lol, no, you don't know about the Chair, but I threw that in there in an Ursula-LeGuinn-ish frame of mind... I should probably change it, but ...

And now for Chapter Three... ^_~ Fyrne stood in a circle of fellow mages, looking up at the older men and then down at his 15 year old hands. They ...

Pretty short chapter here again too, but easier to read than long ones... it's a good way to split it up. ^_^ The purple sand lay calm whilst the Master ...

I look forward to that, Phorcys, thanks! ^_^ Hmmm... you do have a point about the lack of present participles... but do you really think they're necessary? Lol, sorry about ...

(continued...) “The meth-maratime struck with precision, with speed,” the speaker went on while Shan fiercely willed Livny to keep his mouth shut. “... a major victory for the naval powers...”